Author Topic: Bail - Kenworth (Original Mix) [LOOKING FOR FEEDBACK]  (Read 3787 times)

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Bail - Kenworth (Original Mix) [LOOKING FOR FEEDBACK]
« on: March 22, 2016, 05:59:12 am »
Hey guys,

just looking for feedback on a new track

https://soundcloud.com/james-bail/kenworth-original-mix-dl-link-in-description

cheers,

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Re: Bail - Kenworth (Original Mix) [LOOKING FOR FEEDBACK]
« Reply #1 on: March 22, 2016, 03:58:15 pm »
Sup man, congrats on the track
Not really my genre to be giving criticism on but here it is anyway..
So first off, I just wanted mention, you have you song structure in AAB and I just wanted to recommend ABA' (A' being a varied version of your first theme) otherwise it can make the first theme start to feel a little repeatative.
Other than that it's pretty cool! There was a little section at around 0:50 which at first didn't really flow with the song, but nothing big.

Keep it up :)

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