Hi all, I found a really interesting vocal snip from the tv show, The 100, and wanted to give it a trance remix. It's very simple trance, as I wanted to get the fundamentals down first. Let me know what you guys think, if I should change anything that sounds off or if it's good enough to move forward. Thanks!

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Yea dude, you should go ahead and try to finish this.  Simplicity is just as beautiful as the complex.  You could keep it that way and just add a couple counter melodies and a good breakdown and add finishing touches with transitions and tension building and what not.

Good job! keep up the good work 

Good to know! Yeah as much as I want to make it unique, i think it's more important to get the quality right first. Did you feel it was too cluttered with reverb or too much on the high end?