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JAFARi

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Can I have some feedback on this plz :)?
« on: March 21, 2016, 12:28:07 am »

Here's something i'm working on! What do you guys think?

Thanks!
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Re: Can I have some feedback on this plz :)?
« Reply #1 on: March 21, 2016, 05:07:07 am »
yo this ones a party, i dig this a lot. bring that snare out a lil more, i think it sounds really tight dude nice
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Re: Can I have some feedback on this plz :)?
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2016, 05:14:22 am »
Its like, kind of a sad, contemplative vibe (nothing wrong with that though) that tries to be dancy as well but it doesnt quite work for me.  The quick volume change in the beginning sounds like a glitch and it throws me off a little.  You have good ideas but it the melodies are just a few notes off from being really good, so keep messing around with it a little more and see what happens  ;) 
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