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Need a feedback for my ep when i work
« on: March 20, 2016, 06:46:10 pm »
Well guys there is 2 songs when i work for my EP any feedback its good ^^

https://soundcloud.com/articofc/sets/terra-19/s-NLZW5

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Re: Need a feedback for my ep when i work
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2016, 06:56:23 pm »
Dimension: you need more variation (maybe some cool fx) until the chords come in. You absolutely need more power when the chords come in. It sounds really empty, and when you introduce the bass, it does not feel nice. The track starts getting rhythm when you add all the percussion. The build up is semi nice but you still need more, mixing and structure.

there is not coherence between the build up and the drop.  You need to work big time on the drop. look for other presets and try to mix the hi frequencies, you are not giving them a lot of space.

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Re: Need a feedback for my ep when i work
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2016, 05:18:51 am »
yea man like dude said, try n make those chords warmer n bigger.. if u figure out how to do that i think the whole first songs golden. that was a really smart way to make an entrance for that one. for the second one, that intro burnt me out after like 20 secs.. im sayin just start that one w the piano u have ! id like that a lot more, right before that drop, take out reverb/noise homie ! u need to make that first kick n everything stand out as much as possible. these were tight n a cool switch from what i usually listen to

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Re: Need a feedback for my ep when i work
« Reply #3 on: March 21, 2016, 06:32:38 am »
Really tnx guys for you feedback,^i check here in my project and i do my best to work on my songs, the feedbacks of you two guys is on the point, tnx again ^^