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Clandestine Serenity (Chillstep)
« on: March 19, 2016, 07:50:17 pm »
I finished this project this afternoon.  I hope there are some people that can enjoy this!  Feedback / comments are most welcomed, and thanks for listening! <3


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Re: Clandestine Serenity (Chillstep)
« Reply #1 on: March 22, 2016, 01:29:16 pm »
Well, I attempted to try and clean up some of the mud in this however, I wasn't too successful, so I just decided I am completely finished now and I will just close this one out and start working on another project soon.  Just another stepping stone!

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Re: Clandestine Serenity (Chillstep)
« Reply #2 on: March 22, 2016, 03:51:56 pm »
Hey man, first off nice track!

Criticisms would be to maybe change up your chords over the course of the song, and maybe change your distorted bassline to something a little more clean to fit the genre better. Also you have a section at around 0:36ish where you have to synths acting as leads and it sounds a bit like they're competing (comes up again a bit later too)..

Otherwise i enjoyed it quite a lot :)

Keep it up man
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Re: Clandestine Serenity (Chillstep)
« Reply #3 on: March 22, 2016, 04:04:10 pm »
I really like the track and it's really chill. The only thing that annoys me is that high freq lead (it's that sound from 0:28 to 0:42). I would simply remove it and add something else (Like flute?). And that's all propably...Just keep doing track and experiment a lot so you will make better tracks :)
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