Definitely some cool ideas here! One suggestion I would make: Try not to let the break get soooooo quiet. Dynamic range is a good thing but it felt like it needed to be turned up right when the break hit. Maybe increase the volume on the pad.

It also feels very narrow. Try adding some more stereo width to some of the elements. It definitely could use some more layers over all to make it feel "bigger."

Awesome start, keep it up!

I really like this track , it's pretty good. What i would work about in this track is better vocal mix , i mean , there are some parts in which vocal is too quiet comparing to other instruments/tracks (it's just my personal feeling).