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JAFARi

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Trying to make Deep House... Is it good?
« on: March 17, 2016, 09:56:15 pm »


It's my first time and it's a rough draft

Do you guys like it? what should I make/remove/improve?

Thanks for the feedback! :)

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Re: Trying to make Deep House... Is it good?
« Reply #1 on: March 18, 2016, 12:20:02 am »
The droning sound at the beginning doesn't fit well in the track at all. I would recommend tuning it, leveling/EQing it, or just straight up removing it if absolutely necessary. There's too much reverb on everything; reverb is most effective when you have only one or two instruments with it to make them stand out. As it is, it sounds like everything in the track has reverb, and waaaaay too much of it at that, which makes everything sound kind of drowned out. That said, however, the composition sounds pretty solid and the sound design is really interesting!