https://soundcloud.com/kvnzrt/new-thing/s-qGYpQ

this is a new thing i started & would like to share it w/ u guys & stuff. im aware its a little bit repetitive right now, i do plan on writing more onto it, & i heard a few things that were wrong, like the lead cant be heard at sometimes, & i didnt fix that bc its like 1:30am or so & i have school tomorrow, so thatll get fixed eventually. anyways i hope u guys like this lil WIP!!

i tried to embed the private link but it didn't work, sry

UPDATED VERSION:
https://soundcloud.com/kvnzrt/new-wip/s-yIGaV

SHIT

what track?

Sounds very nice, but the melody i hear that on another track i thought.

thanks man! & yeah im workin on fixing that, i think i did on the updated version i uploaded. havent checked on it w/ good headphones bc im in class right now working w/ apple earpods :-/

Great start, I really dig the chord progression, and the space you create in the intro. The pump/sidechain sounds a bit "wobbly", I'd suggest using a really short trigger sample to control it if you don't already.