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Welcome Home (Instrumental WIP)
« on: March 16, 2016, 02:44:00 am »
I started this song yesterday and I'm really proud of what I have so far, what do you guys think of it?

https://soundcloud.com/noose-jenner/welcome-home/s-TjaJp
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Re: Welcome Home (Instrumental WIP)
« Reply #1 on: March 24, 2016, 11:19:29 am »
I really love the Sound of your piano. Also the Piano Riff starting at 2:10 is really cool, it better not be a Sample ;)
I don't like the Bass Sound starting at 3:03, just doesn't fit the track imo.
Generally I really like your idea, but like many other Producers it's lacking that one special thing that would make you really stand out. I can't tell you what tough, I'm still looking for it in my own music...

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Re: Welcome Home (Instrumental WIP)
« Reply #2 on: March 24, 2016, 01:00:49 pm »
yo this is so great i really like the composition but im agree with the other comment that bass sound at 3:03 doesn't fit, maybe experimenting with sound design you can get that special thing that stands out the track, but in general i reckon it is pretty good! ;
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Re: Welcome Home (Instrumental WIP)
« Reply #3 on: March 24, 2016, 06:03:09 pm »
I really love the Sound of your piano. Also the Piano Riff starting at 2:10 is really cool, it better not be a Sample ;)
I don't like the Bass Sound starting at 3:03, just doesn't fit the track imo.
Generally I really like your idea, but like many other Producers it's lacking that one special thing that would make you really stand out. I can't tell you what tough, I'm still looking for it in my own music...

I appreciate the kind words!! Nope, not a sample I actually wrote out the entire song on piano and then let the piano sit behind most of the track. Once I separated the melody by octaves and gave each layer its own place in the arrangement I made the synths and threw the midi in their respective sounds.

I think that special thing may have to do with like a general motif thats so catchy it just gets painfully stuck in your head for days? Something sort of like Porter's intro to Divinity, with that twisted/distorted vox sample. I'm not sure If I wanna get some singing on this track or just leave it instrumental and expand upon whats already there you know? I would really love to discover that special something...

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Re: Welcome Home (Instrumental WIP)
« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2016, 06:43:04 am »
this is nice! music to my ears :)

just add a little more reverb to the piano or the arpeggiator. or the piano with the arpeggiator