My 2cents:
pro: intro and breakdown were immaculate, loved it! instrumentals and vocals compliment each other really well.
con: I think having the bass in so strong during the buildup really took away from the drop, I would advise as the buildup rises cut back on the low frequencies a bit so that once that drop comes its nice and fat making the most impact on the listener.
definitely checking out more of your stuff, keep it up!