Cool idea you've got here! A few pieces of advice:
It is very narrow. Try adding more stereo width by panning more elements hard left and right. It also seems quite. I think this is largely due to the kick sample you are using. The Kick seems to have a TON of sub in it which is stealing headroom from more important elements. It also could punch more.
Defo add some playful panning / width to the percussive elements as well. I can tell there's some, but it they could be wider (in my opinion of course )
Keep up the good work! Got some solid ideas here.