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Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« on: March 13, 2016, 04:27:55 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/126-clap wanted to know what you think of this by now :
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #1 on: March 13, 2016, 05:11:29 pm »
Gorgeous sounds in the intro. The drop is cacophonous, sounds like multiple songs in different keys playing at the same time. The breakdown again sounds great. So I'm really confused about this, it sounds really beautiful and horrible at the same time  ;D :-[
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #2 on: March 13, 2016, 07:08:26 pm »
Quote from: Arktopolis on March 13, 2016, 05:11:29 pm
Gorgeous sounds in the intro. The drop is cacophonous, sounds like multiple songs in different keys playing at the same time. The breakdown again sounds great. So I'm really confused about this, it sounds really beautiful and horrible at the same time  ;D :-[
yea actually i think too that the drop is in someway chaotic i have another a version but idk if it fits either, here it is if u want to listen https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/126-clap2/s-Ujfp0
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2016, 02:09:37 pm »
The beginnig sound very smooth.
The second version is much better. It has a nice beat, some good sounds.
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2016, 06:38:17 pm »
Quote from: Frostshock on March 16, 2016, 02:09:37 pm
The beginnig sound very smooth.
The second version is much better. It has a nice beat, some good sounds.
i reckon im going to work in the second one, i think that adding more sounds with the combination of a good sound design could be a thing :) ty for the comment!
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #5 on: March 17, 2016, 04:05:59 pm »
i really like your clap/snare
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #6 on: March 17, 2016, 05:49:20 pm »
Quote from: nehlz on March 17, 2016, 04:05:59 pm
i really like your clap/snare
thanks! ive discovered that experimenting with the pogo option (in flstudio) drums get snappier cause it modifies the attack of the sound and the transients too :)
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #7 on: March 19, 2016, 04:23:00 pm »
definitely a cool start. A few things I noticed:

-I'd get a different kick sample. It doesn't seem to fit. But that could just be my ears.
-I think you need some more frequencies in the low mid area. Maybe another bass layer or low pad to fill out the sound.
-The low end could use a bit of control. Kinda tough at times to tell what's going on down there.
-it feels a bit narrow. I think it could definitely use more stereo width.

Musically I really enjoyed it! I think it could use some work in the mix category but it's dope!
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #8 on: March 20, 2016, 03:26:56 pm »
Quote from: KLANG on March 19, 2016, 04:23:00 pm
definitely a cool start. A few things I noticed:

-I'd get a different kick sample. It doesn't seem to fit. But that could just be my ears.
-I think you need some more frequencies in the low mid area. Maybe another bass layer or low pad to fill out the sound.
-The low end could use a bit of control. Kinda tough at times to tell what's going on down there.
-it feels a bit narrow. I think it could definitely use more stereo width.

Musically I really enjoyed it! I think it could use some work in the mix category but it's dope!
thanks! i will experiment with the stereo width and eq to try fit the sounds in one, maybe some kinda reese sounds can help to fill the thing out. Really appreciate the comment! :
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Re: Housy Thing / 126 BPM
« Reply #9 on: March 20, 2016, 06:27:44 pm »
when you introduce the drop, it does not make much sense from the previous part... you need a punchier kick and porbably try a different synth for the melody and also another melody.
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