I'm not that familiar with trance, but sounds like you're on the right track. The melody works, although it's nothing really memorable, and the groove is there. The mix sounds kind of thin, too much stuff in the high end. And to me, the lead in the beginning sounds a bit annoying, reminds me of a fly or a mosquito! Might be related to the ear fatigue from the overall mix though.

Thank you for the comments.

I've tried remove some of the annoying high end and layering the lead with a synth one octave lower.