Really like the vibe you've got here! Love the floating vocals, your use of the stereo field, and variety in sounds. The only thing I could really say is maybe make those snares louder/bigger. Add another layer or two one of which has heavy reverb on it (turned down of course)

One other thing I am now noticing is quite a few elements seem to be panned to the left a bit too far. It may just be my ears but it definitely feels imbalanced on the left side.

Starts to get a bit mucky around 3:00.

Really cool song! Keep it up