What I like:
-First Drop, especially the sharp Lead Synth in it
-the fast arp in the buildup before the 2nd Drop
-the chords you used in the 2nd verse in the beginning

What I don't like:
-I know you wanted to sth different in the 2nd Drop... I personally don't like it, but I for example also don't like the Drop in Jack U's Where are you now that many consider genius, it's just my taste I guess
-the heavily detuned Synth-Chords from 0:25 on, way too much detuning imo

Generally I'd try to make it a little more "different" from the original, but other than that it's pretty good