Any feedback on this would be very greatly appreciated! Though I do have some specific questions. The biggest one is how well do you think the end section sounds when all the elements in the track come together? It's not completely done, but the end section will repeat a few more times before transitioning to an outro. Another question is with the bass; do you feel it's too overpowering? I feel like I might need to bring it down a bit, or maybe not. Thanks in advance for listening

https://soundcloud.com/dawid_n1771/layer_experiment/s-41NIB

hey man,
i think the kick needs changing out - it seems quite hollow at the moment and the kick / bass relationship isnt working too well. if i was you i would make the kick slightly punchier and mould the bass around it. i also notice parts of the bass are poking out - try a compressor to tame those peaks - set it up so only on the notes which peak up are being pushed back down.

i do like those washy pads you have going on but yeh like i said the drum track needs some work.

The break is cool with them little plucks. what i did notice about the break is there is absolutely no low end energy for quite some time - not having low frequencies present for too long can kinda lose the feeling of a track - i once watched a 7 Skies video (who is pretty much a genius at producing haha) and he said something like 'if there is no low frequency energy for 15 seconds - youve lost them!' (or something like that)

So id first focus on getting a punchier and tighter kick / bass relationship and then a good drum mix. The atmospheres n stuff are sounding cool thus far.