Cool ideas here. I think the overall mix could use some work though.

-The kick is completely lost in your mix. It is far too quiet for this type of track.
-I think you need more low mids. I can kiiiinnndddaaaa here the sub but there aren't enough frequencies in-between that and the mid range frequencies.

Good stuff overall, keep up the Good work!

I tend to not care for big room sounding songs like this, but I felt this quite pleasant, just some minor errors with mixing, pretty much agreeing with what they said above. Klaang hit the nail dead in the head with his suggestions.