You know... I don't think it's bad. It's not really my cup of tea though. I can't really explain why though. It's probably more of a taste thing on my part but I will add that I enjoy listening to 0:30 more than anything.

I like the sound! however, the song is lacking something in my opinion. Im not sure what, but something that jumps out from the speakers. Sorry I can't explain it better.
And maybe add some extra stuff/fx in the second breakdown and/or the second drop so that the song feels interesting through all 3 minutes.

Keep up the work!