Author Topic: Organic chill track, WIP looking for some feedback and opinions.  (Read 4376 times)

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Learned some new techniques and had an absolute blast mixing this. Not done with everything, but the idea is down.

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Re: Organic chill track, WIP looking for some feedback and opinions.
« Reply #1 on: March 04, 2016, 12:21:23 am »
I think you should switch the second section and the third section around.

I like the slow atmosphere you provide, i also think a more dub style beat might benefit this sound well.

Maybe a few more rhythmic elements to it?

I also like the artwork for it.
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Re: Organic chill track, WIP looking for some feedback and opinions.
« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2016, 09:59:31 am »
Once it hits about 1:15 or so, im expecting something else to keep me interested but it didnt happen because the intro is very good and everything that comes after that just doesnt live up to the promising vibe it gives off.

also, at :58 that pitch rise pad that comes in at the beginning of the break is superb.  Great effect on my brain and setting the atmosphere.  But the interest slowly fades away after that (slowly as in it still keeps me interested but not that much)

good work!

edit: let me add that the mix is pretty damn good which is CRUCIAL to setting this kind of atmosphere.  I forgot to mention that.
« Last Edit: March 06, 2016, 10:02:44 am by alanisnotcool »

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Re: Organic chill track, WIP looking for some feedback and opinions.
« Reply #3 on: March 06, 2016, 09:09:28 pm »
Thanks guys. I updated the draft. I'm very sick, so i couldn't reply.

https://soundcloud.com/ndetro/hello-friend-2/s-M5FIB