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ambient, anime inspired wip
« on: March 02, 2016, 07:27:17 pm »
hi guys :)

started this wip the other day, would LOVE to get critical feedback so i can turn it into something better. don't be afraid to get super nit-picky, that kind of criticism is the most helpful i think.

thanks so much!

https://soundcloud.com/tatsumiport/aurora-3/s-Wpwom
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Re: ambient, anime inspired wip
« Reply #1 on: March 03, 2016, 12:00:42 pm »
Hey dude, love the way this is turning out, it just sounds so damn pretty! Can tell it has those anime influences to it ;> Everything seems to flow together really well, the way everything is harmonized makes it sound so pleasant!
You might benefit with a bit more percussion, that knocking in the background seems to get a bit repetitive on its own, shakers / tambourines could spice it up a bit more, overall really nice and chilled, can't wait to see how this turns out  :D
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Re: ambient, anime inspired wip
« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2016, 01:45:33 pm »
thanks for the response! Yeah, the percussion is minimal, but right now it's just too minimal. Definitely will look into adding some more percussive elements so that it doesn't get too droning.

Thanks again :)
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Re: ambient, anime inspired wip
« Reply #3 on: March 06, 2016, 01:13:26 am »
Yay anime <3 Seriously digging this, love how it builds up in the second half too, looking forward to it being finished // earned a follow!
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Re: ambient, anime inspired wip
« Reply #4 on: March 06, 2016, 01:52:28 am »
Quote from: iBow3 on March 06, 2016, 01:13:26 am
Yay anime <3 Seriously digging this, love how it builds up in the second half too, looking forward to it being finished // earned a follow!

thank you so much for listening :) + thank you for the follow!
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Re: ambient, anime inspired wip
« Reply #5 on: March 06, 2016, 10:37:31 pm »
Quote from: tatsumi on March 02, 2016, 07:27:17 pm
hi guys :)

started this wip the other day, would LOVE to get critical feedback so i can turn it into something better. don't be afraid to get super nit-picky, that kind of criticism is the most helpful i think.

thanks so much!

https://soundcloud.com/tatsumiport/aurora-3/s-Wpwom
i've enjoyed this too much! it makes me think about myself so for me its pretty beautiful and catchy, keep up with this stuff, it is great! (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)
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Re: ambient, anime inspired wip
« Reply #6 on: March 06, 2016, 11:43:50 pm »
Quote from: Apeidon on March 06, 2016, 10:37:31 pm
i've enjoyed this too much! it makes me think about myself so for me its pretty beautiful and catchy, keep up with this stuff, it is great! (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

thanks so much <3 <3
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