I like the rhythms throughout the song, although I’m a bit biased because I like Jersey Club and those types of genres.

Overall I think there should be more melodic ideas throughout the song, or, with the ones you have already, make them more prominent to juxtapose the parts where the focus isn’t on the melody, but the rhythm and bass. You have some melodies throughout the song, but they don’t seem to stand out as much as they could.

(Keep in mind, I tend to like more melodic types of music, so once again that’s where my critiques come from.)

Last thing would be the ending, it ends pretty abruptly, you might want to consider making a longer outro.

Just my opinions, take it or leave it. Good initial ideas though!

Quote from: kimsummer on March 02, 2016, 12:47:57 pm

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I'm unskilled yet. but what would you do If you were at my level...?

Well i guess i would practice and do music whenever i had free time . The song itself, well for me it just sounds like random sound just put together theres nothing a listener could really catch on if you get the point lol . Mixdown needs a work too but that will come with time and practice. Good luck !

yea.. i have to do more practice and making.  thanks for your comment , have a good day there

Quote from: steviewalrus on March 02, 2016, 04:10:42 pm

I like the rhythms throughout the song, although I’m a bit biased because I like Jersey Club and those types of genres.

Overall I think there should be more melodic ideas throughout the song, or, with the ones you have already, make them more prominent to juxtapose the parts where the focus isn’t on the melody, but the rhythm and bass. You have some melodies throughout the song, but they don’t seem to stand out as much as they could.

(Keep in mind, I tend to like more melodic types of music, so once again that’s where my critiques come from.)

Last thing would be the ending, it ends pretty abruptly, you might want to consider making a longer outro.

Just my opinions, take it or leave it. Good initial ideas though!

Actually , i feel the same with you.  I think it should be added like some stabs or chord or pad on the some point. but i was like, quite hesitate to add synthesizing that would make sound awful... anyways, thank you for your comment. and your music is good, i wish i could be your level. x)  have a great day there !

Wow, that's a great compliment! Thanks so much!

Just keep working, you'll figure it out!