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Tried a little futurebass or bass twerk.
« on: March 02, 2016, 12:43:34 pm »
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I'm unskilled yet. but what would you do If you were at my level...?
Thanks for listening...

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Re: Tried a little futurebass or bass twerk.
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2016, 08:43:13 pm »
Definitely cool start. Something I noticed right away is that there's more going on in the left channel than the right. Everything feels tilted to the left side.

My biggest piece of advice would be work on layering sounds. Layer everything. Make stuff more interesting. Bigger, louder, more dynamic. It is definitely good stuff so far! keep it up
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Re: Tried a little futurebass or bass twerk.
« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2016, 12:33:35 am »
This is really interesting.  It's like, juke almost.  But doesn't have that vibe exactly.  I like the space you leave in between the phrases.  And the percussion choice is good.  But I agree with KLANG that everything is panned left for some reason.  Not sure why.  But I would just check your master or something.  And again, I agree with KLANG on layering.  It would help fill the song out a bit.

Keep up the work, dude.  I think you definitely have the skill to make things way beyond this.  Your taste in sounds and groove is solid.
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Re: Tried a little futurebass or bass twerk.
« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2016, 01:13:21 pm »
Quote from: KLANG on March 02, 2016, 08:43:13 pm
Definitely cool start. Something I noticed right away is that there's more going on in the left channel than the right. Everything feels tilted to the left side.

My biggest piece of advice would be work on layering sounds. Layer everything. Make stuff more interesting. Bigger, louder, more dynamic. It is definitely good stuff so far! keep it up

Thank you. I noticed that sound direction as you point out.  I am really good to know that.. :)
and maybe I'm gonna try more about sound layering as ur advice. The stuff i made sounds like little bit feeble and empty to me, too..
thanks for your precious comment. Have a great day ! :)
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Re: Tried a little futurebass or bass twerk.
« Reply #4 on: March 03, 2016, 01:29:58 pm »
Quote from: prodigal on March 03, 2016, 12:33:35 am
This is really interesting.  It's like, juke almost.  But doesn't have that vibe exactly.  I like the space you leave in between the phrases.  And the percussion choice is good.  But I agree with KLANG that everything is panned left for some reason.  Not sure why.  But I would just check your master or something.  And again, I agree with KLANG on layering.  It would help fill the song out a bit.

Keep up the work, dude.  I think you definitely have the skill to make things way beyond this.  Your taste in sounds and groove is solid.

Thank you !! and actually i feel that same ! I feel like something i miss it.. and i was like what should i do to combine whole sound as you say for the "vibe"..
but thank you for considering my stuff in a good way.. and I'll keep ur advice in mind,  and again thanks for encouraging me.  I really appreciate that..  x)  Good day !

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