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EmJay | tips and feedback!
« on: March 02, 2016, 05:42:52 am »
hey guys, i made a song for my gf and id love some tips and feedback to help improve  :)

https://soundcloud.com/emjay-music/hi-jeanne

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Re: EmJay | tips and feedback!
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2016, 10:08:57 am »
Woah, this sounds really nice! has a dreamy sort of vibe to it  :)

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Re: EmJay | tips and feedback!
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2016, 10:52:19 am »
thank youuuu

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Re: EmJay | tips and feedback!
« Reply #3 on: March 02, 2016, 04:26:36 pm »
I love this type happy, melodic type of music (trying make something similar myself), so I like a lot of the ideas, and the general feel of the track you have so far.

Although it sounds a bit hollow to me. Making the bass a bit more prominent could help with this and could fill the track up a little bit more, so to speak. A slap bass type of sound could work really well in this, like what Wave Racer does in the song Flash Drive (linked below, listen to 1:32 and on to know what type of sound I mean).


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Re: EmJay | tips and feedback!
« Reply #4 on: March 02, 2016, 06:21:24 pm »
Reminds me of spazzkid. ^.^
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Re: EmJay | tips and feedback!
« Reply #5 on: March 02, 2016, 06:28:41 pm »
I love this type happy, melodic type of music (trying make something similar myself), so I like a lot of the ideas, and the general feel of the track you have so far.

Although it sounds a bit hollow to me. Making the bass a bit more prominent could help with this and could fill the track up a little bit more, so to speak. A slap bass type of sound could work really well in this, like what Wave Racer does in the song Flash Drive (linked below, listen to 1:32 and on to know what type of sound I mean).

thank you, this is exactly what i was thinking i needed to do, using a different bass like a slap bass. i'll be sure to try it in the future  :)