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armanip

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First Real Track: Ready Player One
« on: March 01, 2016, 11:48:08 pm »


So this is my first real 100% complete track. I hope you enjoy :). Share it if you like it.

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Re: First Real Track: Ready Player One
« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2016, 08:56:22 am »
i like the vibe of the song. i think the vocal pad thing that starts at 0:55 is a bit too loud compared to the other elements of the song, but that's just my opinion
I believe that everyone deserves a listen, even if you've been producing for 5 yrs or you've just started it yesterday!

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Re: First Real Track: Ready Player One
« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2016, 07:35:33 pm »
congratulations on completely finishing a track!  thats an accomplishment on its own because its something I struggle with.  Especially since I am constantly learning so my idea of "finished" seems to get pushed back more and more.

Anyways, i really like the track.  The intro has a playful vibe and i didnt expect it to turn into what it did, and I like the way it ended up a lot. good job!

Szub is right about the vocal.  how much panning do you have on it? I like to play around with the panning when it comes to vocals  8)

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Re: First Real Track: Ready Player One
« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2016, 02:15:59 am »
Thanks guys :) in ableton it doesn't sound as loud. I think it happened because I used Landr to master it but I totally get what you mean. I think instead of panning I might try to use the phaser effect to make some more room or just ultimately turn it down.

I really appreciate the feedback and support :) will go into it a bit later and adjust that pad. Off to the next idea.

alanisnotcool: I was there not to long ago where i never knew what finished is. I think sometimes we don't think its finished but you need to take a step back and listen to it and know hey i like this vibe a lot and i don't want to over do it to where its never done. ya know? I feel like if you have a vibe instead of going further. make that the main part and adjust around it vs adding and adding and adding basically have everything build up to that vibe you made. Listen to one of your favorite song. guarantee its simpler than you think when you break it down. much luck on your productions bud hope those words help

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Re: First Real Track: Ready Player One
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2016, 09:58:06 pm »
It's good...I can see somebody on YouTube wanting to use this. Keep going!