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HighFlyerPL185

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White Leaf "Dawn"
« on: January 06, 2016, 09:52:37 am »
Hi there,

Here's my new work in progress piece; the arrangement is more or less finished, however I'm trying to polish the mixing, and get some basic mastering done, so any feedback and criticism is more than welcome! :)

Possible label suggestions are more than welcome too (if this piece has the potential).

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Re: White Leaf "Dawn"
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 04:29:02 pm »
This is a nice track, the vibes are mellow, but it's still dance-y. The chords are cool, but maybe they could be a little drier. The high hats are noisy too, or maybe they're just loud. This is going in a really cool direction, I hope to hear more of your music soon!
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JamesSweeneyy

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Re: White Leaf "Dawn"
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 04:33:54 pm »
reminds me of ibiza, love the percussion, nice work!

the open hats are a bit too loud though, kind of distracting from the rest of it
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