Hey, what do you guys think of the ideas I have going here? It is really rough but I think I want to continue this and maybe turn it into a full track.

Any thoughts?

https://soundcloud.com/excited-nonetheless/sunday

Cool, the intro really paints a picture - standing next to a car with doors closed and music on way too loud. The only thing I didn't like is the lasery bass sound in the drop. It's sort of cool, but there's something distracting about it. Sorry, can't explain better