Really cool ideas but the song is quite imbalanced. The kick is basically invisible with the mix you've got going. Those little clicky percussive samples you have are cool but they are too loud. They are the loudest part of the song in fact. It sounds like the song is drowning in reverb and that it causing a lot of muck. Try and tighten that up and leave more headroom for your kick as well. Keep it up!

It feels like everything is trying to fight for a place on the spectrum when you start introducing more instruments, make sure you give everything space to breathe so they don't overlap too much, the concept is very nice!