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Neutrin05 - Visions of the Past (chill)
« on: February 28, 2016, 04:37:08 pm »
Hello, my name is Matt, I am new on here but I look forward to talking, sharing, and learning from you all!  I have been producing music now for almost 7 months and I love it.  This is my latest track.  Any feedback provided is immensely appreciated.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_y9Qb5jFp8

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Re: Neutrin05 - Visions of the Past (chill)
« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2016, 06:36:04 pm »
whooaaaa nice! Really like the ambiance and space you've created here.Very nice stereo width on those pianos and a good use of the rest of the stereo field with all the reverbs floating around.

One thing that kind of threw me off is the snare. I think it sounds too high in pitch. It seems to clash with everything else in the song. But that's probably just my subjective opinion on it. Other than that, really clean mix, punchy kick. Good stuff
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Re: Neutrin05 - Visions of the Past (chill)
« Reply #2 on: March 01, 2016, 08:45:08 pm »
Really nice, can't imagine I could've done anything like this after 7 months of producing! The track is very well composed, the snare is a little bit overpowering mabye, or it could have some variation to it as it is constant and on the top of the song, so to say. Mabye a big reverb on the third snare hit etc.

Good work!!

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Re: Neutrin05 - Visions of the Past (chill)
« Reply #3 on: March 08, 2016, 12:17:01 am »
Wow, thank you both very much for the nice words and the excellent feedback you both provided.  Now that you mentioned it, both of you are spot on! That snare is quite loud / overpowering.  Its funny, as I may or may not be alone in this, but as I am making a song, I hear it so much that after a while I become oblivious to things such as this.  Hence why feedback is highly crucial imo.

Thanks again for taking the time to listen and the advice.

-Matt

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Re: Neutrin05 - Visions of the Past (chill)
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2016, 03:41:40 pm »
Love the whistle synth
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Re: Neutrin05 - Visions of the Past (chill)
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2016, 01:35:10 pm »
Love the whistle synth
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