Author Topic: Roast my track like the roast of J Biebs (Slowed down bass house / moombah?)  (Read 4708 times)

iamtesko

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Pretty happy with this one for what it is but something still feels off about it. Curious what you guys think

https://soundcloud.com/iamtesko/deep-down-low-v8-lotsa-shit/s-AA0IG

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I would say work on the overall mix and mastering. Track itself is pretty good man be proud of it but the production could use a little work. Drop doesn't have the exploding feel like it should. Sounds just like the rest of the track in terms of power.
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Disclaimer: I haven't listened to this kind of music. Anyway, to me the mix sounds pretty good on a pair of portapros. The basses are cool, the rhythmic ideas are catchy, and nothing really stands out as not fitting. But you asked for a roast, so

- The lower "low" just before the drop sounds like the guy hasn't quite hit puberty yet. You might wanna ask Tay Zonday to feat on this. But seriously, I think the drop could hit harder if the vocal didn't sound like a burp.
- Also, are you sure the vocal is in English? I have no idea what he's saying, and I think the name of the track could also be 'tea time no'.

Can't think of anything nastier right now.

iamtesko

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Appreciate the feedback guys, I think I've been listening to it waaay too much so I'm gonna rest on it for a few days and the redo the mix by comparing to a reference track.

@Ark you went light on me homie ;) haha appreciate the honesty, that's what I'm looking for. Definitely noted, almost considering renaming it to Tea Time No for shits haha.

But yeah if you guys can roast harder bring it! That's what I'm looking for

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Updated: changed it up a ton, cleaned up the mix, gave it a quick master. It's like 95% there, last step is bounce everything to audio so I can add some subtle details for variation and she's done!

https://soundcloud.com/iamtesko/deep-down-low-almost-done/s-Irq8Z