Not really my genre but I'll try to give some feedback.

Snare could use a bit more bite, sounds a bit too heavily compressed, and doesn't really punch as well as I think it could. For the vocal sample, try easing the transients a little bit for the chops. Comes in a little abrasively. I like the hi hats especially, percussion overall is good, and the bass is cool.

Nice FX around, good buildups and breakdowns.

Nice work.