This sounds pretty good, i love how you have an old school vibe with this.
But the vocal sample should drop out at some point.
I'd add more closed hi hat play. I'd love to hear a really bouncy sub bass line as well.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V775PPuBc7Y^i love that shit to this day dude
But, i think if you kept it dark and aggressive it could work out.
Almost trance like bass line, melbourne bounce esque.
that would make shit fucking bang.