The melody and progression is pretty cool. I know this is a WIP, but the drums are clipping quite a bit throughout the track, so just be mindful of their levels. At around 0:34 I'd prefer to have those drums have more impact (so more low end) and not panned so far out. I don't know too much on the production of rock, but it'd be nice to have the guitars a bit more distinguishable when they're playing at the same time, especially the one playing the melody. Otherwise nice work!
