Author Topic: RudeManners - PUG (Dubstep, Trap)  (Read 4235 times)

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RudeManners - PUG (Dubstep, Trap)
« on: February 16, 2016, 01:17:35 am »
https://soundcloud.com/rudemanners/pug/s-z7ybK
Almost done with this bad boy. Shoot me some feedback:D

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Re: RudeManners - PUG (Dubstep, Trap)
« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2016, 06:21:35 am »
Overall, sounds great.

First listen comments from someone who doesn't listen to trap:
- Something about that hat entering at 0:06 is a bit disturbing. Maybe too much low end?
- I feel like that growl that plays at 2:22 should be centered, or then alternate between the sides. At least on my headphones I wish it would do stuff to my right ear too.
- The pad at 2:32 felt out of place. It's too quiet or too clean or something.
- Pugs are great

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« Last Edit: February 16, 2016, 08:44:46 am by Arktopolis »

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Re: RudeManners - PUG (Dubstep, Trap)
« Reply #2 on: February 17, 2016, 01:45:00 pm »
Those synths are spot on but I feel they're a bit overpowering. The snare feels like its fighting to stay alive and I feel it could have some more low end to it. The hats could be stronger too but thats up to you.

Seriously pretty crazy growls.

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Re: RudeManners - PUG (Dubstep, Trap)
« Reply #3 on: February 17, 2016, 07:32:07 pm »
Wasn't a really fan of the sub, mainly because it had zero movement while the basses were all moving. Made the track feel very boring to me.
Also agreed with above, the pads/supersaws you tried at 2:32 really lack power.