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excited nonetheless
Sub Bass
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just a kid with no money
Cute ass WIP
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February 14, 2016, 09:07:57 pm »
what do you guys think of this? Trying to decide where to go from here. Still really rough and could change a lot based on your input!
https://soundcloud.com/excited-nonetheless/asdawdawd/s-WixbO
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Bertie South
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 14, 2016, 09:20:52 pm »
This definitely has potential. I don't generally go in for vocals, but this sounds like a track that would be good with one. Another thing I would try would be to get a straight 1/2 beat arpeggiated chord progression (hope that makes sense) going around the low mids.
Keep it up!
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A-GON
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 14, 2016, 10:19:25 pm »
could use a better kick but over all its sounds good
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phatscout
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 14, 2016, 10:52:23 pm »
Put the drums in half time and add a "whut" chant on the offbeat
OK jokes aside (even though I'm only half joking when I say that) I like the overall "feel" of the track but I feel like the snare/clap doesn't have enough "presence" in the mix. I guess what I'm trying to say is that maybe you should try adding another clap on the 2s and 4s (so I'd be 1
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excited nonetheless
Sub Bass
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just a kid with no money
Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 15, 2016, 07:07:50 am »
thanks for the feedback guys! I will get around to messing with the drums tomorrow when I can listen at a more comfortable volume (roommates are sleeping currently). I did add some stuff to the track so if you wanna check it out I updated the link in the OP and you can also just click here
https://soundcloud.com/excited-nonetheless/asdawdawd/s-WixbO
lemme know what you think
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FarleyCZ
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 15, 2016, 11:02:41 am »
Yeah, I second that. Pacing is wrong. It's too quick. Either change BPM or make the beat and arppegio slower. But potential is there.
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Arktopolis
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 15, 2016, 11:47:26 am »
Fun stuff! I think one thing that's killing the groove in the latter half is the sidechaining, the release is too slow. As for where to go, if I was writing this, I might try to use the saw pluck as a lead in the breakdown/buildup.
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excited nonetheless
Sub Bass
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just a kid with no money
Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 17, 2016, 12:33:49 am »
Alright, so more changes have been made. I really didn't fuck with the sidechain release at all because I think the groove sounds fine as is. If you guys really think its that much of a problem then i'll look into it, but so far I am really happy with this. I want to add more overall to this song, and vocals are definitely in the works but for now im really thrilled with how this is turning out!
https://soundcloud.com/excited-nonetheless/asdawdawd/s-WixbO
Any other feedback would be dope
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tatsumi
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 17, 2016, 08:22:47 pm »
this feels great already, I'd be excited to hear the vocals you mentioned though! Those could really bring the track up to it's full potential
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Arktopolis
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 18, 2016, 06:13:58 am »
Don't hear any problems with the groove anymore. Nice progress!
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TYGX
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Re: Cute ass WIP
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February 19, 2016, 04:59:08 am »
I like the arrangement of this track and the melodies are really energetic. The synth at 1:22 may sound better if it was more full sounding and without side-chain. Good stuff!
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