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RudeManners - Diamonds (Dubstep House?)
« on: February 12, 2016, 05:06:05 am »
https://soundcloud.com/rudemanners/diamonds/s-ySZCX

Sorry I posted the wrong track the other day. Here is the private link.
I really like the drop, but I don't really like the intro. Any tips or just critique in general.

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Re: RudeManners - Diamonds (Dubstep House?)
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2016, 04:08:57 am »
i think cutting the section from :15-:22 would help the intro and all the other drum section before :15 other than the kick if taken out would prob help the intro with the kick coming back at the :30. I really like the drop though ooo and holding that percussion part at 1:14 just a little longer would sound dope with it going straight into that drop towards the end around 2:07