Okay...so track generally is...good. I personally don't like the beggining (bass pluck).I think that noise from 1:34 is really good , but only to 1:42, because from that part this noise becames horrible (at least for me). I would also from that 1:42 made better drums so it would have more dynamic , also fx with rise up would be great there (but it would require changing the arrangement of the track for some parts).All that what i write before also refers to part after 3:09