I think the melody is great! Reminds me of something Avicii would make, that folk house style. I do have a few thoughts on how you could make it better though. First off, try to get a better kick sample or turn the kick you have up. You definitely have it side chained properly, but I just can't tell exactly what the problem is but you want the kick to be the main focal point of mix/track. Deniz Koyu says when your kick sounds like you are bouncing a basketball it is good. Also, compress your bass together or just turn up the sub in general because it seems to be lacking a bit. You could also make the lead sound you have now mono, and then add some other synths that are a little more stereo to the drop the get it a nice full sound. And finally, add some sweeps/white noise/crowd noise during the drop to fill up some of the stereo image so it doesn't sound too dull. All-in-all definitely keep working on it, I honestly think it has a lot of potential! Hope this helps
