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A song of hope
« on: February 08, 2016, 08:00:11 pm »
would like to share this with you! https://soundcloud.com/apeidon/at-the-end
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Re: A song of hope
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2016, 09:40:45 pm »
Pls let me know your opinions!
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Re: A song of hope
« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2016, 11:12:28 am »
With right approach this could become kind of a Porter-esque experimental track.

Imho:
- Get rid of that jingle bells as soon as possible. May be replace it with a shaker.
- Play with delays and reverbs a bit more.
- Play with filter envelopes on that voice-ish/flute-ish synths.
- Add some damn heavy beat. :)
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Re: A song of hope
« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2016, 09:56:21 pm »
Quote from: FarleyCZ on February 15, 2016, 11:12:28 am
With right approach this could become kind of a Porter-esque experimental track.

Imho:
- Get rid of that jingle bells as soon as possible. May be replace it with a shaker.
- Play with delays and reverbs a bit more.
- Play with filter envelopes on that voice-ish/flute-ish synths.
- Add some damn heavy beat. :)
Thought the jingle bells thing was a good idea xD, thank u for the advice ill try it :)
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Re: A song of hope
« Reply #4 on: February 17, 2016, 01:41:31 pm »
The melody + chords work really well but I feel the mix is lacking dynamics, it sounds too compressed for this type of a track.

You could also try giving a shave to a few sounds with an EQ because I can hear some mud in the mix.
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Re: A song of hope
« Reply #5 on: February 17, 2016, 07:44:54 pm »
Quote from: IKIS on February 17, 2016, 01:41:31 pm
The melody + chords work really well but I feel the mix is lacking dynamics, it sounds too compressed for this type of a track.

You could also try giving a shave to a few sounds with an EQ because I can hear some mud in the mix.
yes i should work hard in eq and compression, maybe controlling clipping is better than compression here. thanks for the advice! :D
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