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In progress remix of Mark my Words by Froogle
« on: February 08, 2016, 12:42:18 am »
https://soundcloud.com/seafarer1/mark-my-words-remix/s-fHqjN

Remix for a Cymatics FM contest.  Please please please let me know what I could fix with mix and flow! :D

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Re: In progress remix of Mark my Words by Froogle
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2016, 12:47:29 am »
That pad in the beginning should have some slow decay. Add some cymbals and hats.
Vocals are kind of quiet, maybe also have some type of percussion, short snares etc in between those chords at 1 minute.
All I can think of for that; this is going really well. Good luck. :)
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Re: In progress remix of Mark my Words by Froogle
« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2016, 05:34:35 pm »
Quote from: outofplastic on February 08, 2016, 12:47:29 am
That pad in the beginning should have some slow decay. Add some cymbals and hats.
Vocals are kind of quiet, maybe also have some type of percussion, short snares etc in between those chords at 1 minute.
All I can think of for that; this is going really well. Good luck. :)

Those sound like great suggestions, thanks man!!
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Re: In progress remix of Mark my Words by Froogle
« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2016, 08:19:45 pm »
Niceeee!! I really like the vocal chops in the drops, aswell as the piano parts. The only thing I noticed is that your sub bass is to loud in some sections, but that could just be me (not listening on decent monitors at the moment..).

Really good job! ;)
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Re: In progress remix of Mark my Words by Froogle
« Reply #4 on: February 09, 2016, 12:22:25 am »
I think you can make that piano melody better that comes in at 2:35, especially the way it comes in. It could be better.

I had to be nit picky because this track is great! Ill have to listen to the original so I can see how it compares. GOod luck in the comp! 8)
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Re: In progress remix of Mark my Words by Froogle
« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2016, 07:50:21 pm »
Thanks a ton guys!  Im making changes accordingly, getting some great feedback.  Really appreciate it.
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