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Everything U R| Down tempo, emotional electro house
« on: February 07, 2016, 11:56:51 pm »
Hey this is something I have been sitting on for a while. Made some changes today and tried my hand at an early master for it. How do you guys think it sounds?

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Re: Everything U R| Down tempo, emotional electro house
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2016, 08:29:56 pm »
Sounds good! I think you could work a bit more at the part beginning at 2:12. I feel like its missing some low ends, I thinks it's the kick which should be a bit more present. Other than that, I like it! Kinda reminds me at Porter Robinson at some parts ;)
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Re: Everything U R| Down tempo, emotional electro house
« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2016, 12:16:49 am »
good job! I know what you mean about sitting on a track.

I love the journey of this track, and the way it makes you think.
I think this track maybe started to sound stale to you after a while and it became hard to finish it, I have that problem all the time. Anyways, I think you could have a big tempo slow down section somewhere and change up the drums just in the one section to switch it up a little.  wouldnt hurt to try.

The drop at 2:12 could use some white noise to bring more energy into it, and maybe a couple of other elements for the same reason.

I think you should try to finish this so more people could hear it!  ;D 
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