Author Topic: The Place (WorkInProgress) (Read 4532 times)

JamesSweeneyy · « **on:** February 07, 2016, 08:09:10 pm »

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xp · « **Reply #1 on:** February 07, 2016, 09:37:08 pm »

You should try adding a short, not too loud 808 snare in place of some of those toms. I think it's ducking too hard during the clap, and maybe take the sub away from the break. I think this track is coming along quite well, I love the chords and also how the toms aren't so loud during the transitions. Keep going at it.

birdwork · « **Reply #2 on:** February 07, 2016, 09:43:31 pm »

Ooh nice. I like the little hits panned off to the side, and especially the little pitched up vocal chops that scatter in. The composition is really cool and I like the arp in the break in the middle. I wonder if the clap could use some more impact? It's kinda distant and lo-fi right now, which is also cool. I like what you have, the style is awesome and sounds like something I'd hear on XLR8R's yearly downloads compilation.

Arktopolis · « **Reply #3 on:** February 08, 2016, 03:31:35 pm »

Sounds great! I kind of like the extreme ducking, maybe it's because of all the future ~~house~~ bass stuff that I've been exposed to lately... Agree with outofplastic about the sub during the break.

As for the toms, to me they sound a bit too thin. Maybe a tiny bit of reverb would help?

FarleyCZ · « **Reply #4 on:** February 09, 2016, 08:53:49 pm »

I love it. I think a little fillter envelope on that hihat would suit it. ...so you have that 10kHz range for few ms, but it doesn't feel harsh after. But that's just tiny little detail. I actually like it a lot.

Great work with vocal chops and detuned keys.

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