2:10, synths that come in are a little cheesy (the arp), add another synth layer and glue the arp with the lead on a bus or something.

The build at 2:30 has some weird volume issues and stereo issues.

The drop at 2:40, the kick doesn't hit hard enough, doesn't feel like a drop, you can see it in the waveform a bit. The lead sounds a little cheesy, and the bass isn't come through. Maybe turn the lead down and separate the stereo a tad, turn up the kick and the bass, the lead doesn't sound to be sidechained to the bass either.

The detail is pretty decent, and you have the right idea during the drop to keep it not stale. Idea's are there, just follow through will some more execution and you've got a good track on the way.

Cool "old" school feeling to it, the drop is good enough imo and doesn't necessarily need to be overdone. Depends on what your after. Mabye some highpass automation + reverb on master before the drop could make it a little bit "bigger". Good job!