I like the idea of this track,

The melody is pretty catchy, the synths sound a little too cheesy in the intro, percussion is too simple, it needs more FX for sure.
For the drop, don't be afraid to go ham, saw bass can be harder, add another layer and maybe turn it up a tad and a bit more reverb. The white noise chopped up thing is cool, but I don't feel like it fits in 100%, kind of comes out of no where, maybe more FX will help with that, and not all the notes fit in 100%, I would say it's almost there.

lots of good ideas, keep it up.