The beginning stuff is very pretty! Engineering-wise, I would say to at least sidechain the bass to the kick, and maybe *lightly* sidechain the reverb to the kick as well to give the click of the kick some more presence.

As for the last part, it's very odd in contrast to the beginning. The crunchy part felt a bit off rhythm with the kick, and I think that you might want to add in some sort of pluck to this, either during the part you uploaded, or in the next section of the drop.

Really interesting stuff. Also, personally I think that your style of music would greatly benefit from some nice chill vocal layers over the pads too