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Genre? No clue. 82bpm chill/dark collab I just did
« on: January 31, 2016, 06:39:44 pm »
Hi! My friend sent me a GarageBand track with just acoustic guitar, and I thought it sounded cool.. So I slapped it into Ableton and made stuff. This is my 2nd track since getting into ableton a couple months ago, so I've got a lot to learn.. All advice appreciated! Mixing, arrangement, anything. Thank you.

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Re: Genre? No clue. 82bpm chill/dark collab I just did
« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2016, 08:18:40 pm »
this is really on the basic side, and try and eq out that muddyness. i think it was pretty good, but it feels extremely unclear to listen to

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Re: Genre? No clue. 82bpm chill/dark collab I just did
« Reply #2 on: February 01, 2016, 12:01:52 am »
A few seconds into the song and I feel there is just too much reverb.  The drone sound from 2:32 to 3:20 muddies up the mix quite a bit.  Overall - I really like the idea.  Sounds like something I'd expect on the Cowboys vs Aliens soundtrack!

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Re: Genre? No clue. 82bpm chill/dark collab I just did
« Reply #3 on: February 01, 2016, 07:35:52 pm »
Right on -- thanks guys!
Yeah, it's definitely muddy, and for a time I was going for a washed-out kind of feeling (a la Ulrich Schnauss), but then sort of went half-assed on it. Anyway, I'll attempt to do some cleanup on the reverb.  I also have a lightly LFO'd LPF on the whole drum rack, but I'm thinking I should bring that out into the clear too now...
I appreciate the feedback!