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Suticase (rewrok/remix) !UPDATED! 02.11.
« on: January 31, 2016, 01:06:03 am »
Dear the ones who read this,

I worked on this whole day long and something feels weird for me and i can't figure out what's that. i decided to sleep on it and tomorrow continue it w/ fresh ears, until then please try to help me. :)

UPDATESo i've changed a few things. tried to match the keys. I've got this so far...
please let me know what did i do wrong.

https://soundcloud.com/iamszub/suitcase-21/s-LgXF0

Thanks!
« Last Edit: February 11, 2016, 09:50:29 am by Szub! »
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Re: Suticase (rewrok/remix) ~
« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2016, 04:30:36 am »
Dear the ones who read this,

I worked on this whole day long and something feels weird for me and i can't figure out what's that. i decided to sleep on it and tomorrow continue it w/ fresh ears, until then please try to help me. :)

https://soundcloud.com/iamszub/suitcase-reworkremix/s-DYiff

Hey man!!

Well i listen here, and well... check the key of the melody dont match with the vocal, pad anything, just check this... and after try to get a structure of your song, like a intro, build up, drop... something when make sense for the music theory! ^^

Have a good production session :)

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Re: Suticase (rewrok/remix) ~
« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2016, 08:18:49 am »
Dear the ones who read this,

I worked on this whole day long and something feels weird for me and i can't figure out what's that. i decided to sleep on it and tomorrow continue it w/ fresh ears, until then please try to help me. :)

https://soundcloud.com/iamszub/suitcase-reworkremix/s-DYiff

Hey man!!

Well i listen here, and well... check the key of the melody dont match with the vocal, pad anything, just check this... and after try to get a structure of your song, like a intro, build up, drop... something when make sense for the music theory! ^^

Have a good production session :)

Thanks for the honest feedback, appreciate it! :)
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Re: Suticase (rewrok/remix) ~
« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2016, 07:02:25 pm »
Yup what Artic said. There are cool elements, but they're not in the same key! I think you'll be on track to a cool song once you fix that.

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Re: Suticase (rewrok/remix) ~
« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2016, 07:26:13 pm »
Yup what Artic said. There are cool elements, but they're not in the same key! I think you'll be on track to a cool song once you fix that.

Thanks! i've already made some changes. :)
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