Dear the ones who read this,I worked on this whole day long and something feels weird for me and i can't figure out what's that. i decided to sleep on it and tomorrow continue it w/ fresh ears, until then please try to help me. https://soundcloud.com/iamszub/suitcase-reworkremix/s-DYiff
Quote from: Szub! on January 31, 2016, 01:06:03 amDear the ones who read this,I worked on this whole day long and something feels weird for me and i can't figure out what's that. i decided to sleep on it and tomorrow continue it w/ fresh ears, until then please try to help me. https://soundcloud.com/iamszub/suitcase-reworkremix/s-DYiffHey man!!Well i listen here, and well... check the key of the melody dont match with the vocal, pad anything, just check this... and after try to get a structure of your song, like a intro, build up, drop... something when make sense for the music theory! ^^Have a good production session
Yup what Artic said. There are cool elements, but they're not in the same key! I think you'll be on track to a cool song once you fix that.