Hey man, i like it! -- all the way up till the drop, just because im not so into this type of music. all those little sounds were seriously amazing tho. i think the buildup could b a little more of a buildup. like add some drums or something to get us knowing the drop is about to smash. nice job w it
- important - try n give people feedback b4 u post a track up! just so when people see ur name in their comments, theyd b more willing 2 give u some help. peace dude

this is my new original, and i was hoping if i could get feedback... I would really appreciate it!!! hope you like it

https://soundcloud.com/kinetics101/song-2/s-5fMSX

Obs: i follow you man, and continue to give more details of this song please

Hey,


There's some weird chord/melody combinations going on in this, I'm guessing that's not totally deliberate but I could be wrong

could you tell me which point of the song you hear these weird parts ? i might have missed it cause iv heard the song so sososos many times now..

could you tell me which point of the song you hear these weird parts ? i might have missed it cause iv heard the song so sososos many times now..

Sure. Having listened closer, there's that atmospheric chord thing in the background that seems to be causing quite a few of the problems - it kinda sounds like it's detuned in itself (i.e. it's not actually hitting notes on the scale but is between notes).

It's particularly noticeable at:

2:08
2:31
2:45 (this one not so much but it's there)
2:56
3:30
4:04
5:26-5:36

The first and last ones at least seem to be because of that chord in the background.. the others it seems like kind of a mix of things. I think changing or taking out that background chord would fix a lot of this, and then it would be easier to tell if the other bits were clashing.


I like the chords themselves though, it's an interesting progression and it works, so I would change the other things around it.

I also think the piano needs some more mid, but personally i think the preferred sound of a piano is very subjective and almost personal imo

Quote from: Jaidyn on February 02, 2016, 01:28:20 am

could you tell me which point of the song you hear these weird parts ? i might have missed it cause iv heard the song so sososos many times now..

Sure. Having listened closer, there's that atmospheric chord thing in the background that seems to be causing quite a few of the problems - it kinda sounds like it's detuned in itself (i.e. it's not actually hitting notes on the scale but is between notes).

It's particularly noticeable at:

2:08
2:31
2:45 (this one not so much but it's there)
2:56
3:30
4:04
5:26-5:36

The first and last ones at least seem to be because of that chord in the background.. the others it seems like kind of a mix of things. I think changing or taking out that background chord would fix a lot of this, and then it would be easier to tell if the other bits were clashing.


I like the chords themselves though, it's an interesting progression and it works, so I would change the other things around it.

thanks so much for the tip :p , i usually get hyped when i find a weird chord and have a habit of forcing it in my songs.. thanks again!