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Supersawn n good melody V2
« on: January 30, 2016, 05:56:04 am »
Hey guys i post a time before a song when i still work, and i receive a lot of good feedbacks you... well i work more on this song, and now i have this...

Private Link: https://soundcloud.com/articofc/v2-1/s-HsTop

Well i think this song is on the right way, but i want to know, what you think about that? i need more feedbacks!! ^^

Thanks again dudes :)
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2016, 07:51:35 am »
Don't remember if I listened to the previous version. Anyway, to me it sounds like a quality track, and I can't really come up with any major criticism. I like the vocal hook, there's something relaxing about it.

One detail: at about 2:25 there's a small glitch in the supersaw, the level goes down, so you might wanna check where that's coming from. Actually there's a similar thing going on at 2:05.
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2016, 11:10:40 am »
it has a good structure and the sounds are good! but in my opinion the supersaws sometimes seem like they need more power! try to add more layers, play with the stereo enhancement or even use multiband distortion to stand out some frequencies! hope i could help with my poor knowledge! :D
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2016, 01:30:48 pm »

This is great man. Nothing i can hear right now that i would change:)  The arrangement is on point, the supersaws are really nice, the bass saw is not too loud, it´s such a dynamic track! changes all the time, i really enjoyed this one.

You took care of the small adjustments you had to from the previous version, and you nailed it.

Bravo.
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #4 on: January 30, 2016, 08:27:28 pm »
Quote from: Arktopolis on January 30, 2016, 07:51:35 am
Don't remember if I listened to the previous version. Anyway, to me it sounds like a quality track, and I can't really come up with any major criticism. I like the vocal hook, there's something relaxing about it.

One detail: at about 2:25 there's a small glitch in the supersaw, the level goes down, so you might wanna check where that's coming from. Actually there's a similar thing going on at 2:05.

Really tnx for you feedback, and yeah i can see what you talk about, i dont know but maybe is a intruser sidechain, or i check the keys, but i fix it soon ^^
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2016, 08:30:07 pm »
Quote from: Apeidon on January 30, 2016, 11:10:40 am
it has a good structure and the sounds are good! but in my opinion the supersaws sometimes seem like they need more power! try to add more layers, play with the stereo enhancement or even use multiband distortion to stand out some frequencies! hope i could help with my poor knowledge! :D

Tnx for you feedback man, hmm... this is interesting, i have two layers to do this sidechain, maybe a up the volume of one or up the mid high frequency of one to dont lost more quality of them, but really tnx man ^^
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2016, 08:32:37 pm »
Quote from: safolly on January 30, 2016, 01:30:48 pm

This is great man. Nothing i can hear right now that i would change:)  The arrangement is on point, the supersaws are really nice, the bass saw is not too loud, it´s such a dynamic track! changes all the time, i really enjoyed this one.

You took care of the small adjustments you had to from the previous version, and you nailed it.

Bravo.

Glad to know you like man, and yeah i work so much to do this song, and i work more to finish up ^^

Thank you so much man, soon i release this song, and i follow you back to :)
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2016, 10:07:18 am »
Dude! This track is so cool! It has a great vibe and everything suits well together! A small thing though; the drop saws have a little bit too much detune on them, i feel. Besides that, its a cool track. It doesnt gets boring or anything you keep it refreshing so thats a good thing! Keep it up!
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2016, 10:19:11 am »
Really digging this track dude! The vibes from it are great! I think it could sound really cool in the final drop if you added some gliding type lead!
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2016, 05:53:27 pm »
Quote from: Seizure on January 31, 2016, 10:07:18 am
Dude! This track is so cool! It has a great vibe and everything suits well together! A small thing though; the drop saws have a little bit too much detune on them, i feel. Besides that, its a cool track. It doesnt gets boring or anything you keep it refreshing so thats a good thing! Keep it up!

Really tnx man, really ^^

i check here the saw on the drop to... :)
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Re: Supersawn n good melody V2
« Reply #10 on: January 31, 2016, 05:55:19 pm »
Quote from: Cias on January 31, 2016, 10:19:11 am
Really digging this track dude! The vibes from it are great! I think it could sound really cool in the final drop if you added some gliding type lead!

I'm glad to know that my music this good for other ears too :)

I see you feedback, and try to put on my song ^^

Tnx man!!!
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