I like the intro, the chords are very good to listen, but when the drop or whatever you call it came I almost threw away my phone, what the heck man?

oh man all around really bad........ im sorry to say it like that dude, that synth that goes thru the whole is extremely annoying, def tone it down on that. the drop really just comes outta no where. theres times to do that, but this was really off. really no cohesion w any of it, try n work on it more! honestly prolly a really easy fix, u got this

Well man here go...

i can see you work to do what you think about music, but is really you try to get something for you music make sense, read more mix things, create or copy a music theory, work on melody because here dont match with other elements...

but continue to work man, all here have a start, But you have a great start, just keep working hard to improve their ideas, and get them to your DAW, I know this is difficult but you will get! ^^