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Trap demo I been messing around with
« on: January 29, 2016, 04:32:42 am »
Update: https://soundcloud.com/cias/thermal/s-8Cf4s
just want to hear some feedback :D
« Last Edit: February 04, 2016, 01:22:09 pm by Cias »

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #1 on: January 29, 2016, 12:43:54 pm »
aye i like this! its pretty cool, i have a few little niggles with it. the intro, the snare like percussion is not to my taste but hey if you like it, use it. also, the kick is weak, maybe add a lower thumpier kick?? i like the filter work you done on this too! keep going with it :)

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #2 on: January 29, 2016, 04:04:14 pm »
this is a really dope idea. the only couple things i would change are the kick and snare. maybe get a kick with more sub and as for the snare, i think that the percussive layer should come in at the drop. also having a reverse reverb every time the snare hits makes it loose that punch. mix it up! otherwise good stuff

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2016, 07:04:24 am »
Thanks for the input guys! I been working on mixing it better since I last uploaded it. When I get something closer to what I like I'll shall share it again!

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2016, 05:02:12 am »
Link: https://soundcloud.com/ciasmusic/thermal/s-Kvj0T
just want to hear some feedback :D

Well something like JAUZ, BASS HOUSE... anyway, the idea is cool, just try to make this song more possible when you can, add more layers on the intro, build up, or drop...

but keep it up man, nice work!

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #5 on: January 31, 2016, 10:24:44 am »
Super cool idea, always did like the pitched up kinda neuro-esque snares used in trap. My only critiques would be that the intro is sorta sparse, but that could've been intentional, and that the build up could have a few more elements of tension involved. Other than that I really liked the granular kinda sound for the build up. Good work :D

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2016, 03:25:03 pm »
Dope track! Cool sounds aswell! The only thing i personally would change is the 808, try to make it a bit more fatter. The rest has already been said really. Keep it up!

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #7 on: February 04, 2016, 01:22:44 pm »
Here's my most recent update guys! :D

https://soundcloud.com/cias/thermal/s-8Cf4s

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #8 on: February 04, 2016, 02:53:49 pm »
Here's my most recent update guys! :D

https://soundcloud.com/cias/thermal/s-8Cf4s

I've said this in my comment on the original post.

It sounds like old school caspa dude.

Love that sound.
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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #9 on: February 04, 2016, 03:14:20 pm »
That kick is noice
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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #10 on: February 04, 2016, 06:25:04 pm »
Wow this is nice. REALLY fucking with the build, although I wish there would be like a lead or bells or something, and introduce the lead towards the end of the build up. Really fucking with this

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Re: Trap demo I been messing around with
« Reply #11 on: February 05, 2016, 12:44:09 am »
Thanks for the feedback and compliments guys! Trying to make more and more improvements :D